Saturday, October 17, 2009

The Mist Comments

Rating: 5.0

it was a mist
a cloud coming down from the sky.
touching the earth, and you and i.
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louis rams
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Kranthi Pothineni 21 October 2009

Well themed and beautifully composed.

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Matt Mooney 18 October 2009

A rare gem of a poem with a series of pictures from the Bible and the life of Christ.The subject is well illustrated in your simple lines describing an extraordinary vision.

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Shashendra Amalshan 18 October 2009

Woww.. This is such a powerful poem.. The first part of the poem is like a scene from a movie.. Reading this poem was an enthralling experience.. Liked your message too.. A++ cheers Shan

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:) a wonderful piece.. nice bro.

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