samyak jain


..The Monsoon Song.. - Poem by samyak jain

your naughty mood
impels the naughty strands
of hair on your fore head
to play with my face
raised upwards to your lips.

silently i watch the
breath getting quicker
until
the thousand monsoons
decide to bathe the earth,
and
the silent banyans
of the land scape
acquise
not to raise a storm without,
for
the storm within is becoming
unmanageable.


..atp..
09.04.2008.


Comments about ..The Monsoon Song.. by samyak jain

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (5/23/2017 9:57:00 AM)


    silently i watch the
    breath getting quicker
    until
    the thousand monsoons
    decide to bathe the earth, passion, intimacym thousand monsoons pouring in...... lovely expression.. tony
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  • Bharati Nayak (7/21/2015 8:58:00 PM)


    The inner storm, becomes unmanageable with heightened passion, thousand monsoons decide to bathe the earth- - emotions of restless heart nicely depicted in this beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Asif Andalib (11/23/2012 1:20:00 AM)


    Great flow of emotions. Lovely write (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (5/2/2012 9:29:00 PM)


    The image of a restless lover is depicted within the short span of words.Nice write! (Report) Reply

  • (4/23/2008 3:46:00 AM)


    quiet sweet n dramatic....
    liked it...
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  • (4/16/2008 10:46:00 AM)


    Nice mysterious piece of work. Liked banyans good work (Report) Reply

  • (4/10/2008 1:28:00 AM)


    a veryvery visual n enjoyble read aasiq... (Report) Reply

  • Vidi Writes (4/9/2008 9:11:00 AM)


    They say when India collided with Asia
    Tibetan Plateau is formed.
    This Geographical change had brought
    Strong Monsoon to this country.

    They also say ‘History Repeats’
    There would have been many
    Raised lands with such collisions
    But our gain is not the height but the Monsoon...
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  • (4/9/2008 8:40:00 AM)


    Very good job my friend. Definate vibes of passion and lust, excellent imagery, I really enjoyed. (Report) Reply

  • (4/9/2008 7:48:00 AM)


    Very beautiful, powerfuil, passionate. Well done, Aasiq.

    Don
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 9, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 10, 2008


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