The Mother Nature Poem by Surayya Abbas
The Mother Nature
In a cool winter evening
Sitting by the fireplace
Looking at the rainy shower
My heart dampened
With condensed drops of moisture
Travelling on the window
Like shiny diamond grains
Trying to cut the glass off
They were reflecting light
Like twinkling tears once I saw
In my Mother's eyes.
Out there in the lawn
Ten white roses on a single branch
Were praising the pure water
And dancing in chorus
Rain! Rain! Rain!
I could feel their refreshing mood
Like fragrance of my childhood.
My eyes filled with
Beauty of the Mother Nature!
12/21/2008
It's really a beautiful poem. The description of Nature's perfection is expressed in a very elegant fashion.....Regards
Such a sweet poem....the combination of nature and mother's love is really a heart touching....regards
The poem presents uncommon combination of images, winter, lawn, white roses, rain, shining drops and winter evening....good job go ahead. Shanazar
Wonderful write...good use of allegory in almost all lines...the image the 'diamond grains' create there is really nice...thanks Surayya...10
Beautiful theme. You combined your Mother and Mother Nature to celebrate dancing delight of our gift of life, water. Wonderful imagery throughout. 10 Krarin Anderson
Beautiful poetry. Mother Nature is a perennial source of bliss but engroosed in matter we are tormented and shattered. CP
Beautiful.One of your very best. I like what you have seen from your own personal window on the world. Warm regards, Sandra
surayya u have very sensitive heart as i can see in our poems very well write we need more from you dear
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/20/2024 5:33:38 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Beautiful poem....Nature is the main creating force as well.