Last night......
I saw him
In my vision,
He was whispering,
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In continuation to your last poem, again you have touched nicely 'the missed opportunity' part. Thoughtful poem once again.Full *****
Sometimes there are things that will come in our life that could put dark clouds in our vision and lead us to confusion..A very thought provoking poem nicely presented.
Gotta love the continual build-up of mystery and suspense! The conflict between the old shadow and the new shadow so eloquently expresses the good and bad within our nature. Ultimately, Good always triumphs!