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The Night I Tried To Kill Myself

Rating: 2.9
The night I tried to kill myself
Was like a scary dream
A knife held to my neck
No one heard me scream

The cuts over my body
As I tried to bleed to death
It didn't seem to work
As I took a deep breathe
Theres not point living life
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Adam Yaklin 20 April 2010
Your poem would work better, if you worked on the number of words/syllables in each line.
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Shekhar Joshi 27 May 2009
This is chilling and gruesume u have done well to let your readers feel the pain and dark side. well done indeed(only if the story ain't true)
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Mimi Fakhira 12 December 2008
Was the suicide thing true? I'm beginning to shiver now... 'coz you did a deadly good job! Fiona's right, Hang on tight. Life is full of surprises and we should live it everyday. Promise me you'll write more!
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