Suicide, suicide
Your presence is near
Suicide, suicide
I wish you were here
Suicide, suicide
Take me away
Suicide, suicide
Please make it today
Suicide, suicide
An answer, for me
Suicide, suicide
I need to escape, be free
Suicide, suicide
I’ve had too much
Suicide, suicide
Take me, do your touch
Suicide, suicide
Leave the rest behind
Suicide, suicide
You’re all over my mind
Suicide, suicide
Let me pass in peace
Suicide, suicide
I need to release
I am confused as to what poetic value is upheld by the poem?
If all you in the comment are going to act this way you should all kill yourself you should be ashamed
To first time I read this first place member poem. Lisa you definitely have a way of releasing your tension. It is dramatic and at the same time light and airy.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
YOUR POEM MAKING SKILLS BLOW.. PLEASE KILL YOURSELF NOW YOU ARE A DISGRACE TO THE HUMAN RACE!
You are a terrible excuse for a human being. Take your own advice.
Take your own advice.
Nigga
Nigga