Lisa French

Suicide.

Suicide, suicide
Your presence is near
Suicide, suicide
I wish you were here
Suicide, suicide
Take me away
Suicide, suicide
Please make it today
Suicide, suicide
An answer, for me
Suicide, suicide
I need to escape, be free
Suicide, suicide
I’ve had too much
Suicide, suicide
Take me, do your touch
Suicide, suicide
Leave the rest behind
Suicide, suicide
You’re all over my mind
Suicide, suicide
Let me pass in peace
Suicide, suicide
I need to release

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 10, 2009

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  • Dark PoetDark Poet (1/24/2014 3:03:00 PM)

    This is Beautiful. I understand the struggle, and this just touched my heart [3

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  • Jenna Reschenthaler (6/4/2012 8:55:00 PM)

    Lisa French, this is some of the most beautiful deepest writing i have seen on this sight.It is true the insight in this poem.....The people who say smut and trash about this really dont understand this.

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  • Kirstie Deukett (3/23/2012 12:44:00 AM)

    This is a really deep poem, your an amazing writter.....

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  • Cheyenne Newsome (2/26/2012 6:11:00 PM)

    this is how im feeling right now nothing seems to go right for me.

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  • Anthony Williams (2/25/2012 9:44:00 PM)

    Hello Lisa your poem is awesome I'd like to talk to you e mail at anthony126333@Gmail.com

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  • Nick Woodmansee (2/11/2012 1:50:00 PM)

    kitty vincent! you are the reason people kill themselves! YOU ARE THE DISGRACE TO THE HUMAN RACE! Lisa french! i know how you feel! don't listen to the lies!

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  • Kitty Vincent (1/11/2012 12:08:00 PM)

    YOUR POEM MAKING SKILLS BLOW.. PLEASE KILL YOURSELF NOW YOU ARE A DISGRACE TO THE HUMAN RACE!

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    Anonymous(9/3/2019 2:46:00 PM)

    Take your own advice.

    Anonymous(9/3/2019 2:45:00 PM)

    You are a terrible excuse for a human being. Take your own advice.

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  • Kitty Vincent (1/11/2012 12:05:00 PM)

    you suck at making poems

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  • Jacquitta Knowles (12/15/2011 10:47:00 AM)

    yyyyyyyyyoooooooooooooo dat s.h.i.t. live i likes dat

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  • Adler Schroeder (8/22/2011 4:03:00 AM)

    I understand how you feel... Even I dream of suicide to take me. Many people say that the message is awful, but sometimes we all need a way to release our emotions - and sometimes that 'way' is through poems. I can feel your pain, and I hope that you will be free...

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  • Kristanna Williams (4/16/2011 7:13:00 PM)

    this poem is everything i feell....

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  • Dead Man Walking (Tyler) (5/7/2010 7:23:00 AM)

    I hear your pain and feel it to. But be carfull with what you will do. Do not kill your self only your pen. Look around and you'll see your friends. Dont die not just yet. Your a beautiful girl I bet.

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  • Anna Gomez (4/20/2010 8:38:00 PM)

    Hey! im only 14 and i am suicidal. I am emo and I cut myself all the time. SOmetimes itsa life choice! @

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  • Karen Wolff (4/18/2010 11:31:00 PM)

    Lisa, suicide is never the answer. I can't believe some of the comments about this being entertaining, or someday you'll be free from problems.These comments make me so sad. Listen I am bipolar suffer from depression and have panic attacks, I know how you feel but trust me killing yourself is not the answer.Tomorrow could be a better day there's so much to live for get to a doctor fast please i really do care and will pray your ok Think about your family and the grief they would never get over. Keep writing but write about hope and goals, places you'd like to visit-write about your future dreams.I'm 49 now its been a hard life but i can still smile and force myself to live love and find happiness I care please care about yourself Medication will help e-mail me if you want to talk I'm sorry your going through this.

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  • Amy MarieAmy Marie (2/3/2010 8:07:00 PM)

    I can totally relate to this very entertaining poem. I personify suicide as my imaginery lover ;)

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  • Allan O (11/10/2009 5:31:00 PM)

    not an enjoyable read yet not a piece to miss...your concept is wrong but your writing talent is strong...thanks Lisa ~^..^

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  • Peter Vector (11/10/2009 4:45:00 PM)

    Suicide, I like it, not necessarily the act itself, but the slightest possibility that you could someday be free of all these problem and people. I feel your pain and embrace; I too once wrote about these things, but me being unstable at the time never convinced myself into any of it, but oh, well I enjoy the poem none the less, it is good to know I'm not the only one out there that may think in this train of thought, and with this said I rate it a 10.

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  • Anthony Foster (11/10/2009 4:29:00 PM)

    The poem is good construction the message awful. If you can write poetry like this grab life with both hands and enjoy it.

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  • Pedro Rubio (11/10/2009 3:58:00 PM)

    wow. so simple yet has so much meaning. it sucks how suicide can be so near to us at many occasions. yet something always keeps us thinking straight. yet we constantly are going to obstacles that make suicide seem to be a much more peaceful solution. but i tell you this. Dont. hold on. no matter what your going through hold on. good things come to those who wait. keep waiting for better. you'll be happier in the end. lovely poem though.

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