Suicide. Poem by Lisa French

Suicide.

Rating: 3.9


Suicide, suicide
Your presence is near
Suicide, suicide
I wish you were here
Suicide, suicide
Take me away
Suicide, suicide
Please make it today
Suicide, suicide
An answer, for me
Suicide, suicide
I need to escape, be free
Suicide, suicide
I’ve had too much
Suicide, suicide
Take me, do your touch
Suicide, suicide
Leave the rest behind
Suicide, suicide
You’re all over my mind
Suicide, suicide
Let me pass in peace
Suicide, suicide
I need to release

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kitty Vincent 11 January 2012

YOUR POEM MAKING SKILLS BLOW.. PLEASE KILL YOURSELF NOW YOU ARE A DISGRACE TO THE HUMAN RACE!

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Anonymous 03 September 2019

You are a terrible excuse for a human being. Take your own advice.

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Anonymous 03 September 2019

Take your own advice.

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TJ 21 September 2022

Nigga

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Anonmyous 21 September 2022

Nigga

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Marvellous poem. Totally emotionally charged. Captivating. The repetition of certain words and phrases throws the emotional vulnerability of the protagonist effectively. Well done, dear poet.

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Dark Poet 24 January 2014

This is Beautiful. I understand the struggle, and this just touched my heart [3

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Kirstie Deukett 23 March 2012

This is a really deep poem, your an amazing writter.....

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Cheyenne Newsome 26 February 2012

this is how im feeling right now nothing seems to go right for me.

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Anthony Williams 25 February 2012

Hello Lisa your poem is awesome I'd like to talk to you e mail at anthony126333@Gmail.com

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