Suicide. Poem by Lisa French
Suicide.
Suicide, suicide
Your presence is near
Suicide, suicide
I wish you were here
Suicide, suicide
Take me away
Suicide, suicide
Please make it today
Suicide, suicide
An answer, for me
Suicide, suicide
I need to escape, be free
Suicide, suicide
I’ve had too much
Suicide, suicide
Take me, do your touch
Suicide, suicide
Leave the rest behind
Suicide, suicide
You’re all over my mind
Suicide, suicide
Let me pass in peace
Suicide, suicide
I need to release
I am confused as to what poetic value is upheld by the poem?
But first and foremost, nevertheless, but not, needless to say I'm confused. What value is upheld in your comment?
To first time I read this first place member poem. Lisa you definitely have a way of releasing your tension. It is dramatic and at the same time light and airy.
Suicide is a topic that should never been taken lightly. It may convey the depressed state of mind at a particular point.The new morn may begin with new light. And those who comment should be careful whether we are right by writing hurtful comments and what message we convey to others.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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10/5/2026 12:50:09 AM # rel_20260925T122446Z_7d6ee41
YOUR POEM MAKING SKILLS BLOW.. PLEASE KILL YOURSELF NOW YOU ARE A DISGRACE TO THE HUMAN RACE!
You are a terrible excuse for a human being. Take your own advice.
Take your own advice.
That Is not ok