The Open Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

The Open

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The open!

The open Country,

The open Country of love;

Peace and joy! !

Pen to write with,

Hen and den along the line;

Like the ways of love and life!

Living and learning always.

Grains of any kind! !

To gain the truth;

Chains and pains of love and life,

Like a train in the rain.

Brain drain!

The open,

Heat, wheat, eat!

With the meat of love;

Able to enjoy your status! ! !

And to enhance your life,

To enhance your mind with the truth.

The open!

Ten fingers given to you,

Like the Ten Commandments! ! !

Bar of life,

A car to ride along with,

Able to see the tar ahead of you;

Like a Bright Star shining in the night,

With the beauty of the moonlight.

Fowl, owl!

Able to open the door of the truth;

To render it very clear! !

Manifest it with true love;

Positiveness!

Mankind on earth,

A pure choice with the truth!

Able to voice out.

Sunday, February 9, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: imagery,manifestation,poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 10 February 2020

The open! ! To render it very clear. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 February 2020

A powerful and wonderful write. IIt conveys a universal message of freedom. Brilliantly penned.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 February 2020

True love! ! Positiveness! Righteousness. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Prabir Gayen 09 February 2020

Mankind on earth, A pure choice with the truth! Able to voice out.

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