The Operation Poem by Herbert Nehrlich

The Operation

Rating: 4.0


Slowly, meticulously breathing
withdraws his hand with the small blade
a bleeder now, nipped in the bud
compartment syndrome is a maybe.
The men in green now throw their gloves
discard the status symbols quickly
into the lounge, still full of buzz
that lung was so far gone, sweet Jesus.
Malignancy plus metal jacket, hollow point.
Oh, comfy chairs, be pleased we're coming
and light my fire, kiss the camel
in through the mouth, out through your nostrils
some day the bell may toll for us,
but, worry not, we are the Gods,
there's neither destiny, nor death.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pradeep Dhavakumar 13 May 2005

Very well written Herbert.Simple execution with a gentle flow.Thank you.

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Sandra Osborne 13 May 2005

Ahhhh, and I say that you are the master. You are the goal that I reach for, the talent that feeds me. As always I love you, as always, you are my friend.10++

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