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The Pains I Bore

Rating: 4.5
The pains were too great to bare
Yet I bore every bit of it
My delicate heart I watched you tear
With your ugly shinning teeth

I wonder what I did to deserve
This foul deed of great mockery
You promised me all you have
But you took from me everything
I was only sixteen when you devoured
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Thursday, November 5, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: heartbreak,hurt
Khairul Ahsan 05 November 2020
This is a poem from a woman's point of view, written by a male poet. The poem is good, but a bit too long and repetitive. 'Submissive I was with great compliance And grew them daily afresh' - To me, these were the best two lines of your poem.
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