The Patient Spider Poem by krishnakumar chandrasekar nair

The Patient Spider

Rating: 5.0


I wonder what he does
Between catches and kills
Waiting, patiently waiting
On that ornate web- his design
And what does he think
With his pint sized brain(if any)
Standing on eight distorted legs
Above a ceiling upside down
(or is it right side up for him?)
Leading a proper spiders life
Lonely, and whose only music is
The buzz of a fly caught on his strings..?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I have always wondered what these spiders do meditating endlessly in a very still world only broken by winged meals.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I especially love the opening question, the frame of the first and last three lines of this poem, which wonderfully sets up and closes the thoughts between.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 22 April 2015

Your ability to weave poems out of such very ordinary sights is amazing. Enjoyed this one.

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Heather Wilkins 21 October 2013

patience pays off. he will catch the spider just a matter of time. good write

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Abhishek Mishra 02 October 2013

An enjoyful write sir and good observation too...loved it: -)

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