The Positive Mind Comments

There is no try, Do or do not... Master Yoda.. The force is strong in this one...10

I hear you David You speak words of wisdom. My sorrows and lies I have imprissoned, building my walls so high. I'm longing to be forgiven, and for this I pray.....Oh Lord in heaven...sustain me in possitive minded ways..... You do have a calling David.....your words touch many people : O)

Poured across the screen like fine oil, beautiful, soft undertones all set with a creative- thinking behind the scenes, ah, tis David a positive message from one of poem-hunters finest Take care my friend Love duncan X

Impeccable work, David. I love the emotion and attitude in this piece. Ari :)

David, as always, a magnificient pice of writing! You are so engaging in your work! A ten from me, Theo