The Pressure Poem by Bonnie B Long

The Pressure



The pressure surrounds you
Sucking you in tighter and tighter
Til you can't breathe
The stress pulling at you
every which way but loose.

The feeling you're going to burst
Is so enveloping
You feel like you can't take anymore
How can one man
Cause all this stress.

How much can one woman endure
How much can one woman take
The degredation and
Denounciation are more than
Any one person should have to take.

Its time to say its over
I'm done, I'm through
Its time to get out
Time to be on my own

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ray Lucero 15 February 2007

Bonnie, Your feelings come through strongly from your poem. Use those feelings to give you strength to do what you must. Knowing when to walk away is difficult but ultimately rewarding. Peace, Ray

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