The Privvy.......Toilet Trolls Poem by karen sinclair

The Privvy.......Toilet Trolls

Rating: 5.0


Twas sordid that thought
Midwinter handed a lit
Oil lamp
Glowing
Showing the way outside to the shiny black paint of
The toilet door

Lift the latch....clunk! as your eyes scoured the darkness the bushes
For bogey men, trolls and murderers

Place lamp on window sill
Put small buttocks on the winter chilled toilet seat

Heart beats at a quickened pace
As a small scared face gazes
Out
Eyes foraging the white painted walls
For spiders and daddy long legs
Anything that crawls
And flys
And eats small, small children

Eyes down on two chubby little legs
Distant from the floor
And go girl go!
As quick as you can
As the sounds and rustles blown outside are
Definitely
The bogey man
He's coming after your guts and gore
Push little lady and try to be gone
Before
The doors ripped off its hinges
And you are dragged into the abyss
And they will all read about
The little lost Miss....

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Just thinking about being small and the dreaded outside toilet in the dark especially winter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Anderson 18 July 2012

I have never read such a gripping account of a trip to the privy. You are probably a stronger person because of your earlier experiences. Hang in there, gal. Your writing is great

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Dr.subhendu Kar 18 July 2012

Ill settle with my memories and a warm bowl of Cream of tomato Soup..........oh what imagery! , really amazing with utmost perfection in explaining fact employing wonderful tools of precision f t, thanks dear Karen for sharing

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Valerie Dohren 18 July 2012

Thank goodness for en suites! ! Very amusing Karen.

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Saadat Tahir 18 July 2012

lolzzzz...the demons that reside within us....howl and scream...wail like banshees and rip our heart out and hey you made such a fun writing it...beautiful....loved it :)

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