Melody Of Love Poem by karen sinclair

Melody Of Love

Rating: 5.0


Lay me
Amongst the melody that is Mozart
Weave his notes in my lank dark hair
Spirit me to a world of horses
Pacing
Triumphant trumpets fill the air

Heartbeats to thunder glorious
Harlequin with masquerade mask
Ostrich feathers to tease the breeze with
Smile on me
Is all I ask

Fill my sky with Michelangelo
Cherubs
Outreaching hands
Offer me spark filled lightening
Whisk me to foreign lands

Let my breath savor scents of lavender
And grass that's freshly mown
Know that all is glorious
Bed of roses
In mind full dreams
You're never alone......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajkamal P.j 02 October 2012

a touchy poem.lots of feeling.dreams make us live when nothing is our own.it, s all nature, s drama.keep writing..best wishes

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Danny Draper 03 October 2012

Sensuous and sumptuous images and emotions and love told splendidly.

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Bursting with beauty from a marvalous march of melody. Well done my friend! 10+

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Vera Sidhwa 05 October 2012

An elegant poem! ! ! Imagery about romance in a gorgeous setting of words. Amazing poem. Vera Sidhwa

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Ramesh Rai 05 October 2012

last stanza is truly elegant pacifying romance in a gorgeous setting of words, thanks for sharing.

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Martin Mclean 15 November 2013

A beautiful poem that is very cleverly constructed. The gentle dreamlike rhythm is punctuated by ecstatic bursts which grab the reader's attention. Yet the opening and closing softness gives a coherence to the poem as whole. Variable line lengths, alliteration and occasional rhymes enhance this rhythm. A great achievement.

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Valsa George 11 October 2012

Sweet as a melody with capturing images! !

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Rick Elpers 07 October 2012

Karen this is a beautiful write. Full of sensual imagery that pleases even the weary. It's power also draws sadness as when even grandure is diminished through loneliness. Such as I... I like it very much though.

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Anita Sehgal 06 October 2012

melodious and soft and dreamy... lovely

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Valerie Dohren 05 October 2012

Lovely imaginative write, very inspired.

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