The Promise Poem by shilpi saxena
The Promise
When I was a little wench,
I thought the world is all fair.
Everybody is ready to help others,
No sadness, no tear.
When I became some old,
I feel something wrong.
Everyone is busy in themselves,
They only sing a selfish song.
Now I am living in my present age,
The ancient thoughts were arising.
But suddenly I found a shining star*
That is u, who are so inspiring.
Thou alters my views,
You show me the reality.
Now I believe there is someone,
Who ever takes care of me.
O! u are my peculiar friend,
Came into my life as a miracle.
Just like me you were also alone,
But now we are Friends Forever.
We will surely touch the welkin,
If we neglect the trifling things.
I Promise ever truthful to u and
Promise me to do the same everlasting.
That is a true account of friendship portrayed very well. The poem was well meaning and reminded of my own best friend. Beautiful indeed... Why don't you write more? One poem doesn't suit your caliber :)
u r seemingly promising poetess.....explore ur poetic skills and entertain the readers more like us...poignant write...well done
well two words came striking when i read this work of yours.. Elegance and Innocence.. :) .. Keep improving.. You definitely have something within.. :)
A good start with a nice poem, Shilpi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.
Dear Shilpi this is a very nice combination of the gradual learning process in the world it is a mixture of good and bad. Thanks for sweet composition. I invite you to read my poems and comment.
Superb! .....................so loving lines............keep it up.
waww! What a passionate, emotional and loving poem, u get it good keep it up.
hey dear where r u now a days....why dont u wrote some more interesting poems... love the poem very much
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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3/30/2023 9:32:20 AM # 1.0.0.1113
this world is still fair as you see. a nice poem