The Promise Poem by Kwai Chee Low

The Promise



The orphans's favourite haunt was the bridge,
decrepit and crescent shaped
like the half moon above.
When the dreaded time came for parting
they promised to meet there again.

Every year he waited on the bridge,
scorched by the sun, scorned by the rain.
Till birds returned to their nests,
till stars shimmered in the water
and farmers trudged home from their fields.

The crescent moon lingered with him,
as the purple dusk darkened into night.
Memories of their childlhood,
the good times and bad,
were all that were left.

Friday, March 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: memories
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 23 March 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Kwai. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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kwai chee low 23 March 2018

Thank you. Glad you like it.

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Cigeng Zhang 23 March 2018

The Bridge is an imagery as the connection to the past.Some old memories like the water under the bridge flowed back again. A beautiful poem as usual.

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kwai chee low 23 March 2018

Yes, Cigeng, the bridge connects to the past. I was inspired by the real life story of a daughter who was given up for adoption 20 years ago and where she and her biological parents met again. She was from your homeland.

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