The Raining Man Poem by Fredoneth Jonelas
The Raining Man
The rain when drop
Cold wind snap
The feeling of cold
Like alone in the world
Your back turn out
Leaving me no scout
Losing in my sight
Feels like a frost bite
To see no tears
Flowing on my face
Standing under the rain
Feeling no pain
Thy grudge I bear
Takes time to heal
For Love, a curse to thee
leaving scars to me
You are comparing the rain to your emotions, I like that, keep it up the work and effort. If you want to see how I compared rain to myself and the situations. Please read Rain, and Rain 2.
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4/26/2024 3:20:01 PM # 1.0.0.1119
a great way of expressing emotion, each line compliments the other an excellent piece