The rain when drop
Cold wind snap
The feeling of cold
Like alone in the world
Your back turn out
Leaving me no scout
Losing in my sight
Feels like a frost bite
To see no tears
Flowing on my face
Standing under the rain
Feeling no pain
Thy grudge I bear
Takes time to heal
For Love, a curse to thee
leaving scars to me
You are comparing the rain to your emotions, I like that, keep it up the work and effort. If you want to see how I compared rain to myself and the situations. Please read Rain, and Rain 2.
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a great way of expressing emotion, each line compliments the other an excellent piece