The Raven And The Crow Poem by May N

The Raven And The Crow

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what is the difference
between a raven and a crow?
for one has a more beautiful name
than the other one has to show

has jealousy seeped into the crow
to hate the raven so?
to think of such an evil plan
and sink so very low

To take away all of the things
so quick and so abrupt
and take away the raven's life
it's nothing but corrupt

the raven lies there bleeding
dying by each passing minute
the snow soaks up its dark red blood
before the cold then kills it

triumph reigns inside evil
elated as it might feel
a cold eminates from it
loneliness will be its chill

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marcella D 29 August 2009

very creative with the raven poem, good!

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Adeline Foster 29 December 2008

A lovely poem to answer a Question. The difference between a raven and a crow? Take a look at the logo for the Baltimore Ravens football team and you will see that the beak is orange or yellow, as you will. In actuality the orange tint in the black bill is very subtle. That is the difference although the raven is larger than the crow. Makes a lovely trivia question. Adeline

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Desiree Burdick 29 December 2008

such a amazing poem its very good :)

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 16 December 2008

the raven coherent the crow take a bow side by side nice rhymes May. brett.

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Hadi Hakkai Renato P. 16 December 2008

it's great! i really like it and it rhymes!

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Cagayan de Oro, Philippines
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