The Revenge Poem by Sakib Ahmmed

The Revenge

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When I fall over into dungeon deep
All the nature drying,
The Heavenly star fall down darker
When the lighten crying.

Friday, January 25, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: children
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is my first elegy poem.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Fallen into dungeon deep! Very nicely penned.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 March 2019

good start read my moms smiles ung man kid take no revenge its too early

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Mahtab Bangalee 06 February 2019

beautiful and stunned writing

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Sakib Sarkar 06 February 2019

Thank you mahtab bhai

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Bharati Nayak 04 February 2019

When I fall over into dungeon deep All the nature drying, The Heavenly star fall down darker When the lighten crying. - - -A thought provoking poem, thanks for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 27 January 2019

Nice poem with a philosophical touch and a positive message for the world. Thanks, Sakib.

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Sakib Sarkar 27 January 2019

Your thank is giving to my rank.

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Tangail, Bangladesh
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