The Rose Poem by Jeremy Willson

The Rose

Rating: 4.5


There once was a rose
A hard life in the gutter it choose
It was tough with a thick stem
A crystal in the mud like a rare gem
It had plenty of water and some sunlight
But it didn't matter if it never rained or had no light
It still grew but never blossomed
It felt the cool wind and heard when the birds hummed
It stayed alive no matter what
The door was never open always shut
No problems in the dark is what it thought
Only never being blossomed is what it wrought
Now the rose is dying
It will not live to see the spring
The life of a rose is painful
It opens it's leaves to the death angel
It floats into the air and onto the sidewalk
Only for people walking by to make fun of and gawk
This isn't some flower it's a rose
It's soul still cries out and the whisper echoes

Wednesday, January 27, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In this poem the Rose is symbolism of my grandmother who lived in Mexico and came to America, she was abandoned by her husband and left to take care of her 6 children by herself.She spent countless years working in the fields to support her children and give them everything she could.She was a kind woman, loved by all her grandchildren including myself.She died when she got sick of ammonia at Hospice hospital.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Godfrey Morris 27 January 2016

Truly enjoyed reading this poem. Great write.

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Jeremy Willson 09 April 2016

Thank you it means a lot :)

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