You don't want see my face
For the mistakes I made
Now you want to make me cry
Or want to see me dead
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You sounded like those things you pointed out are really rumours, and you were trying to convince her not to focus on them. All in all, it is a good and well-written poem, and a delighful read.
This is what I call a sober poem, really good and forgivable. I wish u are forgiven, Asif.
simple but splendid....this piece is full of emotions and brilliantly written indeed, thank you for sharing love payal
I liked this piece expresses what i call whispers in the wind, words linger, captures the ear in a different context, nicely written
A great heartfelt poem so deeep and powerful!