The Sad Poem Poem by Arron Fowler

The Sad Poem



Come save me my darling I am so lost.
Head's spinning backwards and forwards.
All I see Is darkness no room for the light.
When beauty is wrong and ugly is right.
Sleep for hours but still feel exhausted
Body's fed up it don''t want to work.
Minds playing games, who's laughing at me.
My figure, my skin, my insecurity.

Look into reflections but they seem to giggle
photos I see them and I just puke
All I see is darkness no room for the light.
When beauty is wrong and ugly is right.
Don't know where I'm heading
or damn where I'm going
Don't know if I'm stupid or if I'm all knowing
My emotions my feelings I'm scared of just showing.
know the real me then read my sad poem.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This the first poem i have wrote. I started it last night i would like advice and critisism that people can give me. I will ket you guys guess what this poem is about. Thankyou
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Arron Fowler 03 January 2013

yeah this was the first one didnt really put thought into it. I do like this one as it is a starting point

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Dawn Lambert 02 January 2013

it's great and sad but it's really good but confusing.....

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Arron Fowler 29 December 2012

Ha ha thanks was ina bit of a sad mood yesterday ahah. Will be a lot more cheery ones soon

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