The Sand Poem by Brittanie Thornton

The Sand

Rating: 5.0


The sand on the beach never looks the same,
No matter where you stand something always has to change
Why does life have to be so difficult?
Not always do things have to change,
People would rather have things stay the same…
But what fun would that be,
Things set to a routine
Always knowing, no excitement
People would rather have routine instead of change.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
SAM Mitsuki 14 April 2009

True some do like having a routine but some are also willing to deal with change. A great poem ^^

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Lynne Crandall 04 May 2009

This is really good! Great rythym and so true!

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Megan Collins 21 April 2009

I agree with Catina! It would be a greatsong. Finally not a love poem. I love how true the meaning is :)

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Catina Crum 16 April 2009

Oh, yeah! And I think this should be a song.: ]

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Catina Crum 16 April 2009

'The sand on the beach never looks the same, No matter where you stand something always has to change' Wow. Very nice, Brit, good rhymes. Good perspective.

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Aylissa Ramirez 15 April 2009

i like i like makes me think: D

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