The Sea, That Is, Your Eyes Poem by Emma Kessler

Seem's a bit short and not the words I'd use but everyone has their own style and if this is the style that makes you happy, then it's a good poem. Flow is important and you can only have flow if you are happy with the style. It's a great messege and overall a good poem. I like it.

short sweet and gets straight to the point, i love it well done keep it up. i like short poems because you can become lost in a really long poem and lose the point of a long poem where as a short snappy poem keeps you alert well penned xx

Big story in little lines I find this effort very very good no fancy words just love in lines ++++9 regards

A short lovely and sweet poem! ! ! Emma has shown a great talent with her efforts in writing poems as it was told above.She has a especial way of writing them, and everytime when I read something new, different from what I've read, it makes me feel better with every creative idea.The mainly reason I'm so glad, it's not only because of her poems that she has shared with us, but the mainly point for me is to have her friendship shared with me.To read a good poem is, for a good reader, it's like to eat a good food that, sometimes, you wont never forget.But, to know the poet, it's like to see how the dish was prepared by the 'chef' before you can eat.I'm so greateful and pleased to be friend with you Emma...Thank you a million! ! ! !

I do think, eyes, can be like deep pools, in which you can sometimes dive into the knowledge and emotions of the owner. Blue is my favorite color, especially for eyes. I could look at them all day. :) Great writing... Marina Gasbey...

Emma, this is lovely.....

I could see the ocean. Great imagery. ps. Blue eyes are the best.

I could see the ocean. Great imagery. ps. Blue eyes are the best.

a sweet poem indeed 10/10