The Women Of Death

Rating: 5.0
The women of death
Loom over the heartbroken
Weighing down upon them
Speaking the only words they know
'Why didn't you? '
'What if? '
For hearing these words can kill us
Even more than the loss
Monday, December 21, 2009
Amy Marie 06 November 2011
Wow...another great poem with a meaning I can somehow understand in a way, without fully experiencing what it's about! A sign of a good poem :)
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Shirley Hanley 24 January 2010
Sounds like the name of The Woman of Death is....... Guilt.
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Lindbergh Hughes 22 January 2010
A wonderful poem! ! ! Although Emma is still defining her own style in writing poems, she shared with us in this one, one of the most intriguing questions of the human being: 'Why can't we change terrible happenings in our lives? ''How could we find out other ways to end an unpredictable situation? 'My advice is: 'Let the life in itself answer this question for us! ! '
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Afzal Shauq 13 January 2010
awesome, , , hmmm loved the idea 10/10
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Dick Badian 08 January 2010
dear Emma I don't know a thing about you.butI I am hanging on your depths..believe me Emma, you dive deep in this poem...bringing forth the the key that opens my mind and leave me with an untamable desire to read more. 10 pointer from holland
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Rani Turton 23 December 2009
I liked the psychological overtones; dealing with the women of death is one of lessons of life, or being condemned to perpetual guilt.
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Sally Plumb Plumb 23 December 2009
I agree with your thoughts.
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Luke Johnson 22 December 2009
This to me is the most interesting work you have. I love the concept of 'the women of death'. But I want more. Is it ok to ask for that? Expand on the concept and make this piece longer.
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Julieanne Copcutt 22 December 2009
Emma this poem gave me goosebumps, so well written, and so very true, Keep up the good word, your friend Julieanne
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Lynn Glover 22 December 2009
Very Good write and I have frelt the broken heart of the second line. Keep up the good work. Your friend Lynn
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