The Seedling Poem by Eddie Roa

The Seedling

Rating: 5.0


A seed buried in fertile soil
Pushed out its stem towards the light
Growing a two leafed head
Bowed and fragile yet breaking loose
From the hold of a determined bond
Of a possessive earthen cage

Earnestly it struggled to break free
Frail but prodigious creation
With its tiny roots sucking strength
To shove the heavy load pressed on
Puny shoulders and bent stalk
Eager to burst out into the sunlight

Somehow in its eagerness to grow
Its life was smothered by a blanket
Of mud slurry caused by a flood
Oh what a tragic and unjust fate
A seedling with leaves, a branch, a trunk
Snuffed of breath, denied of life

It would have been a grand acacia
With brawny brown branches
Holding up a heavy canopy of jade
Dominating a landscape of weak brushes
Majestic in its proud demeanor
Taming unruly and fractious winds

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 05 May 2009

Wonderful poem full of symbolic images Eddie...10+++

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Charmaine Sinclair 18 May 2009

How I wish the seedling grew.

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Reshma Ramesh 13 May 2009

such a nice poem.........well penned

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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 May 2009

Wonderful, nice imagery.

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Sue Sie 05 May 2009

All that struggle for re birth gone......great vision read here...10++

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Kamil Michnicki 05 May 2009

I think you'd really like William Wordsworth. He writes a lot about nature.

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Eddie Roa

Eddie Roa

Manila. Philippines
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