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The Seventeen's

The emerald-like innermost feeling of the yore
Spreads out at the deepest part of the soul  
Shimmering with dark-green light on the other bank of time

The maid wearing a pink skirt
With a confused heart
Often strolls on the bank-side grass
Yet she can never pass
Even with expectation and aspirations
The ivy-coated door

Daylight and starlight continually keep replacing each other
With tear drops gliding adown on the strings
Crystal clear, salty bitter, and still silent

The ever-lasting fair shadow of adolescence
Treads the lawn of life painful
And the sweetness of seventeen's will stay lingering lifetime after all.

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By Rose Lu (Bing Hua) Tr. East Sea Fairy
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Erica Morgan~maples 24 July 2013

i love that one it's very good very well written, and very haunting as well keep up the good work

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Gajanan Mishra 24 July 2013

life painful, lifetime after all, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Bing Hua 05 July 2014

Thanks so much PoemHunter's friends! Your Team is so great! I love PoemHunter!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 January 2019

The ever-lasting fair shadow of adolescence Treads the lawn of life painful And the sweetness of seventeen's will stay lingering lifetime after all. lovely appreciation of life's years 17 signifies IMMORTALITY Something unique happens most lose virginity Thoughtful poetry

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 November 2017

With tear drops gliding adown on the strings Crystal clear, salty bitter, and still silent The ever-lasting fair shadow of adolescence Treads the lawn of life painful And the sweetness of seventeen's will stay lingering lifetime after all. A nicely penned poem with this lovely stanza. 10++++ for the poem. Subhas

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Prativa Rani 01 November 2017

With tear drops gliding adown on the strings Crystal clear, salty bitter, and still silent Lovely poem shared. 10+++ for it.

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Bing Hua 05 July 2014

Thanks so much PoemHunter's friends! Your Team is so great! I love PoemHunter!

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Bing Hua 05 July 2014

Thanks so much PoemHunter's friends! Your Team is so great! I love PoemHunter!

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