richy kar

Rookie (16 0ctober 1991 / orissa)

The Shadow Behind Me. - Poem by richy kar

I see the shadow flickring behind me,
as It passes through the dark peaky road,
surrendering itself to the darkness of the sky.


i see it moving abruptly in the full fledged road of darkness,
with mind so disturbed and confused,
unable to reconcile with the narrow endings of the night.

but what can it do to pass away,
from shadow of darkness, the shadow of death
to embalm the light of life.


but to condole, be enamoured with, is its way
espousing the essence of life,
to full blown sunrise.


Comments about The Shadow Behind Me. by richy kar

  • Jazib Kamalvi (10/12/2017 11:04:00 AM)


    A great start with a nice poem, richy kar. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks (Report) Reply

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  • Vidi Writes (5/21/2008 1:38:00 AM)


    Shadows made of an object
    May never loose its properties.
    But shadows made of mind
    Never has any identity itself
    Than what you figure it out.

    Be watchful of your mind in creating those shadows.
    Its better to be cautious of those shadows
    Never be afraid of those.
    All the best.
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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (4/8/2008 3:46:00 PM)


    shadow yet flickers
    darkness still ends
    sun when rises in the east
    world yet embalms the light.....................lovely poem when wrought by the ingenuity, congrats dear Richy, and you derseve 10+, thanks for sharingf
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  • (4/8/2008 1:45:00 PM)


    Real nice poem very thoughtful and sincere well done (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 8, 2008



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