The Shooting Star..! Poem by Vidya Pandarinath

The Shooting Star..!

Rating: 5.0


A shooting star from the heavens began to glide
Down, across the dim weary reflection
Of light beaming from a hide out;
It went darting dipping now in pride,
Making viewing souls seek benediction,
Waving their open palms round about;
Fear sought relief from destruction and death
While Hope spattered as bubbles of charm;
The dull null mind heeded no whit;
A poet's sleeping idea found it's breath,
Ruffled and thawed as it became warm
And got into the fill of a zealous pen, fit
The space and path, free for a drag
Found it scribbling and dancing in a zigzag

Saturday, December 25, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: thoughts
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Rhyming Pattern: abc, abc, def def, gg
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 25 December 2021

"Fear sought relief from destruction and death" marvellous expression. Lovely poem. Top score

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