Raymond Farrell

Gold Star - 27,244 Points (02/09/1954 / Perth, Ontario)

The Short Stocky Young Chinese Fellow - Poem by Raymond Farrell

The short stocky
Young Chinese fellow
Who lives next door
Is perpetually
Washing his car
Today, after a heavy rain
He was at it again
He has a wife
Slender and attractive
With long flowing black hair
And I am sure
If I were him
I would spend
A lot less time
Washing the car.

Topic(s) of this poem: social comment

Comments about The Short Stocky Young Chinese Fellow by Raymond Farrell

  • Wes Vogler (12/25/2015 12:53:00 AM)

    I chuckled. Doesn't happen very often. Clever write. give us some more. (Report) Reply

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  • Eugene Levich (4/13/2015 10:31:00 PM)

    Great wisdom in this poem! (Report) Reply

    (4/13/2015 11:01:00 PM)

    I appreciate your insight.

  • Kelly Kurt (4/4/2015 1:32:00 PM)

    I liked this, Raymond. And I agree with your reasoning : -) (Report) Reply

    (4/4/2015 8:43:00 PM)

    Thank you for reading my poem and for your comments, I appreciate it.

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 4, 2015

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