'The Smell Of You' Poem by Linda Winchell

'The Smell Of You'

Rating: 5.0


I was in love with the smell of your skin
as I laid next to you at night.
Soft and light brown skinned of man
with a buttocks, so firm and tight!

Your legs stretched on for miles
you eyes like some soap opera king!
But your personality my darling
had some improving it, to bring!

You were mean, with a condescending tone!
I lived with you for nine years trying
to make our house a home!

No matter what I tried to do
you found fault with it all!
But something kept me hanging on
hanging on until my fall!

You made sure you had another
in the wings, waiting to move in!
And I became but a memory
of where our love had been.

I'm sorry I waited and tried so hard
I know now you weren't worth the work!
Because all you gave me was a hellish life
and you acted like, an ass, a jerk!

But sometimes in the dark of night
as I lay next, to the man I love now!
I can still smell the scent of your skin
I seem to still smell you still somehow!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Louis Rams 02 December 2008

THIS IS A VERY GOOD PIECE., AND IF YOU HAVE GONE THROUGH THIS, THEN I SUGGEST THAT YOU THINK OF THE GOOD MAN YOU HAVE NOW, AND FORGET THE IDIOT WHO DID'NT APPRECIATE YOU. I HOPE YOU DON'T FIND MY COMMENT OFFENSIVE. GOD BLESS AND YOU GET A 10

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Very good.. This happens a lot to people this love triangle.. I do this sometimes too i get a smell that will smell just like my ex... So i can relate to this.. Great piece Krista

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Linda Winchell

Linda Winchell

Chicago Illinois
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