The Smoke Spreading Under The Trees Poem by RIC BASTASA

The Smoke Spreading Under The Trees

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the smoke spread under the trees
from a certain burning firewood
on the house not far from where we talk

it spreads far
and this evening as i get too bored
we look at the hazy subject matter
as it moves farther to a certain visible distance

and despite the pollution
i imagine something more artful than this damage to my lungs

under the trees
the smog is beginning to shape itself
into a chine painting
of the dawn and its mist
like a poem written
by one of the poets that i love to read

Tu Fu, Li Po,
or was it Kulafu?

Saturday, October 10, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: poets,pollution
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Estrella Baldemosa 10 October 2009

Li Po...yes, Tu Fu? ...i have doubts... but Kulafu? hahahahha you made laugh today Mr. Bastasa.

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