The Snow Globe Poem by Alex Harper

The Snow Globe

Rating: 4.8


You may not realise
I have not shared
but deep down
I am like a snow globe!
When you talk to me
When you reach out to me
Outwardly I appear smooth
Cool and calm
like a mirror
projecting a scene of tranquillity
always setting the scene
always making sense of your surroundings
giving a glimpse of bigger pictures
wider fields
But inside I am like a Snow Globe
Ever word you utter
shakes me to the core
my world become a blizzard
a myriad of incandescent snow
thoughts that flurry
that settle uncomfortably
atop of one another
jumbled
You cannot reach inside
I cannot touch you whilst I am there
I can only project the image
a totally silent reflection
a sense that everything will settle
and the scene will return to its original order
Inside I am screaming
Often I do not see the woman
I only see the child
You are mine and everything that touches you
Everything that hurts you - Shatters my world!

Alex Harper 20/10/2015

The Snow Globe
Tuesday, October 20, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: daughter,love and life,silence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 03 November 2015

Beautiful depiction of the mighty experience of love, well articulated and insightfully penned in poetic diction with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing.

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Fabrizio Frosini 20 October 2015

in a previous comment I wrote ''everybody lives in his/her own bubble.. '' - now I read of your 'snow globe' and I find it a perfect metaphor.. Thank you, Alex. Welcome at P.H. and keep on writing cheers Fabrizio

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 October 2015

deep down I am like a snow globe! You cannot reach inside a totally silent reflection daughter, lovre, life, insecurity, fear you touch perennial themes of love and life. thank you. liked your poem very much tony

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Alex Harper 20 October 2015

Thank you Tony, I am so glad you like it. I enjoyed your poem too, I am going to have to learn how to rate them as I am very new to this site Alex

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Kelly Kurt 20 October 2015

Lovely poem, Alex. Thanks

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Liza Sudina 20 October 2015

How strong is your love to your daughter! you are stressed because of her? and bcome an avalanche? but if it is out of love- it will bring only care and calmness!

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