The Storm Poem by Kishore Kumar Das

The Storm



When I see you
your thoughts begin to revolve
around my mind
creating a low-pressure zone
the movement of thoughts
slowly turn into a storm
displacing all other thoughts
with your obsession
Is it reciprocal
or one-sided!
Is it mutual
or lop-sided! !
the storm gradually subsides
as you are out of sight
and...
out of mind.

The Storm
Monday, April 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: obsession
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Roussell 24 August 2018

I really like how you used the storm to illustrate feelings of obsession. A creative poem. A10.

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Just an infatuation was it? Liked it

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Kishore Kumar Das 08 April 2016

an imaginary concept blended with natural disaster......

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