The Silvery Touch Poem by Kishore Kumar Das

The Silvery Touch

Rating: 4.7


Moonlit night
dawn approaching
darkness fading out
the cool gentle breeze
with shining moonbeams
myself watching the moon
from my roof top
ohh...what a pleasant sensation
every part of my body
bathed in the moonlight
I was the recipient of joy
in the silent night:
Great is the creation of the Almighty.

The Silvery Touch
Saturday, March 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: moon
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 24 August 2016

I was carried away by this little poem. Felt like I was right there on the rooftop in that cool gentle breeze. Well done indeed! Congrats on poem of the day!

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Plabita Bhaskar 30 March 2017

Moon a luminescence, its gleam a blessed glade. Its silver touch brushes all the glum away, coating silvery light all its way. A beautiful poem it is! ! thanks for sharing.

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Kishore Kumar Das 30 March 2017

Thank you Plabita for your sweet comments..

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Queeny Gona 17 May 2017

It's always a pleasure to watch the magnificent moon in the sky. Either a kid or age old preferably finds solace in watching the luminescent moon in the darkness. The beauty of the read and its connectivity to the likeness of many writers here in PH, made it stand poem of the day! Congratulations dear poet pal!

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Thank you for your generous showers of appreciation......

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Jenamani Bijoy Kumar Roy 24 September 2020

Too nice

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Kishore Kumar Das 24 August 2018

Richard, Juan-austin, Rubana, Bipasha, Rajesh, Kumarmani, Anil, Savita, Chandan, Roussel, Fran, Bharati, Rini, Geeta, Petals, Dillip, Sylvia, Mahtab, Ruta..........I don't find any suitable adjectives to express my thanks to all of you for the excellent appreciation shown to my poem. This particular poem was based on my actual experience in watching the moon after midnight at my roof top. I can very well infer that an actual experience can create superior poetry.

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Richard Wlodarski 24 August 2018

There is indeed a spiritual feeling when looking at the moon! Being at one with the universe! Kishore, Congratulations on Poem Of The Day!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 August 2018

A beautiful poem that captures the beauty and wonders of the moon. Great imagery.10+++

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Rubana Sen 24 August 2018

Moon boon is well known to us, it has reflects here in this poem, great poem

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