Kishore Kumar Das

Gold Star - 17,769 Points (Cuttack, Odisha)

The Silvery Touch - Poem by Kishore Kumar Das

Moonlit night
dawn approaching
darkness fading out
the cool gentle breeze
with shining moonbeams
myself watching the moon
from my roof top
ohh...what a pleasant sensation
every part of my body
bathed in the moonlight
I was the recipient of joy
in the silent night:
Great is the creation of the Almighty.

Topic(s) of this poem: moon

Comments about The Silvery Touch by Kishore Kumar Das

  • Queeny Gona (5/17/2017 4:26:00 AM)

    It's always a pleasure to watch the magnificent moon in the sky. Either a kid or age old preferably finds solace in watching the luminescent moon in the darkness. The beauty of the read and its connectivity to the likeness of many writers here in PH, made it stand poem of the day!

    Congratulations dear poet pal!
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    Kishore Kumar Das Kishore Kumar Das (5/17/2017 10:29:00 AM)

    Thank you for your generous showers of appreciation......

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  • Plabita Bhaskar (3/30/2017 1:59:00 AM)

    Moon a luminescence, its gleam a blessed glade. Its silver touch brushes all the glum away, coating silvery light all its way. A beautiful poem it is! ! thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

    Kishore Kumar Das Kishore Kumar Das (3/30/2017 6:10:00 AM)

    Thank you Plabita for your sweet comments..

  • Randhir Kaur (8/25/2016 3:29:00 AM)

    Congratulations Sir...Again a beautiful poetry..
    Great is the creation of the Almighty....
    Some things are so alluring that even words fail to describe it..but u have explained the beauty as well as nature....And d picture reminds me of an old day of mine..Can relate it...
    Keep inspiring n writing Sir..All my best to you. Respect.
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  • Bernard Snyder (8/24/2016 10:36:00 PM)

    Nicely written poem! Congrats on having it chosen as ' poem of the day'! (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (8/24/2016 6:58:00 PM)

    Congratulations for the Poem of the Day! ! (Report) Reply

  • (8/24/2016 1:07:00 PM)

    My favourite object, the Moon. And this is a particularly good poem on this amazing object!
    Well done on poem of the day. Certainly deserved.
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  • Pamela Sinicrope (8/24/2016 12:46:00 PM)

    Congrats on poem of the day. This is a lovely piece of writing..I already commented, but I enjoyed reading it again and think your accolade is well deserved. Thanks for sharing your poem. (Report) Reply

  • Seamus O' Brian (8/24/2016 12:11:00 PM)

    I enjoyed this poem. Thank you for allowing us to share with you the beauty of this experience. (Report) Reply

  • Kim Barney (8/24/2016 11:18:00 AM)

    I was carried away by this little poem. Felt like I was right there on the rooftop in that cool gentle breeze. Well done indeed! Congrats on poem of the day! (Report) Reply

  • B.m. Biswas (8/24/2016 10:15:00 AM)

    when feelings is real and TO THE heart content enjoying what is the function of language? ... what a word painting....the picture we can feel and we feel that as if we are on the roof for a has DE-familiarization touch Russian formalists points out......great. congratulations on being MPOTD. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (8/24/2016 8:57:00 AM)

    Lovely little poem aimed at highlighting the beauty of a moonlit night with a blissful pleasant sensation of the atmosphere. Thanks for sharing. Congrats for your selection for the day.
    every part of my body / bathed in the moonlight / I was the recipient of joy
    Great is the creation of the Almighty.
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  • (8/24/2016 8:38:00 AM)

    God's creation is indeed beautiful. Nothing more pleasant and serene than being out on a moon lit night. Thanks for sharing the poem. Happy Krishna Janmashtami to you. (Report) Reply

  • Clarence Prince (8/24/2016 7:18:00 AM)

    Great is the creation of the ALMIGHTY' Yes, so unspeakable and full of glory!
    Thanks for sharing, Kishore!
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  • (8/24/2016 5:32:00 AM)

    Fantastic narration of the sensations in the moonlit night has made this poem superb. Heartiest Congrta for inking it as also on it's Poem of the Day. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (8/24/2016 5:22:00 AM)

    Darkness is fading out! ! With the ways of nature. Thanks for sharing. Having your peom as, poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Jasbir Chatterjee (8/24/2016 4:11:00 AM)

    Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem and the beautiful pic of the moon...Congrats on being poet of the day! (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (8/24/2016 2:52:00 AM)

    receipient of joy in silent night - meaningful really, namaskar (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (8/24/2016 1:59:00 AM)

    A lovely poem, Kishore. I often go out at night and just sit alone and look at the moon.
    Congrats on poem of the day
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/24/2016 12:39:00 AM)

    Great is the creation of the Almighty. This is absolute truth and moonlight night witnesses this interestingly. Very amazing poem is drafted and shared really. Nice drafting.....10 (Report) Reply

  • Asis Biswas (8/13/2016 1:17:00 AM)

    with the beautiful poem, poet has added a picture.Poet, your way of writing is too much. very simple , no complexe anywhere at writie on light, light, and wind. (Report) Reply

    Kishore Kumar Das Kishore Kumar Das (8/13/2016 1:46:00 AM)

    Thank you Asis for your wonderful comments.....

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 26, 2016

Poem Edited: Monday, August 22, 2016

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