Moonlit night
dawn approaching
darkness fading out
the cool gentle breeze
with shining moonbeams
myself watching the moon
from my roof top
ohh...what a pleasant sensation
every part of my body
bathed in the moonlight
I was the recipient of joy
in the silent night:
Great is the creation of the Almighty.
Moon a luminescence, its gleam a blessed glade. Its silver touch brushes all the glum away, coating silvery light all its way. A beautiful poem it is! ! thanks for sharing.
It's always a pleasure to watch the magnificent moon in the sky. Either a kid or age old preferably finds solace in watching the luminescent moon in the darkness. The beauty of the read and its connectivity to the likeness of many writers here in PH, made it stand poem of the day! Congratulations dear poet pal!
Richard, Juan-austin, Rubana, Bipasha, Rajesh, Kumarmani, Anil, Savita, Chandan, Roussel, Fran, Bharati, Rini, Geeta, Petals, Dillip, Sylvia, Mahtab, Ruta..........I don't find any suitable adjectives to express my thanks to all of you for the excellent appreciation shown to my poem. This particular poem was based on my actual experience in watching the moon after midnight at my roof top. I can very well infer that an actual experience can create superior poetry.
There is indeed a spiritual feeling when looking at the moon! Being at one with the universe! Kishore, Congratulations on Poem Of The Day!
A beautiful poem that captures the beauty and wonders of the moon. Great imagery.10+++
Moon boon is well known to us, it has reflects here in this poem, great poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I was carried away by this little poem. Felt like I was right there on the rooftop in that cool gentle breeze. Well done indeed! Congrats on poem of the day!