Friday, May 2, 2014

The Storm Came Comments

Rating: 5.0

The storm came without any notice
like the Kaal-Vaishakhi, to sweep the dry leaves
the storm came without any notice
to customize the nature, for pan-creation of life
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ramesh rai
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Chris G. Vaillancourt 07 May 2014

Nice flow to this poem and good storyline. Enjoyed the read

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Hazel Durham 05 May 2014

Deep, meaningful write about the strength and force of nature let loose without warning!

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 04 May 2014

Precise and complete depiction of storms that come unpredicted and unwlecomed.

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Storm comes suddenly. No warnings from the weatherman are heeded. Storm does its destruction. The storm came to adjure the life. Truth is nicely stated. Thank you.

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