The Story Poem by julius lenjatin

The Story

Rating: 4.0


Story teller:

just hours after being hired
He got fired
by the story he aired


the story:

'they roll in sleek cars
under the shine of the deem stars
to hunt down those with financial scars
whose get-away tool is their God-given beauty'

'six days a week they roll in holes and in bars
on Sunday they join the mass'

the listener:

for him its all merry
and a no-chance to say sorry
for that kind of a story

he lives a legend of the seeker
of immorality and rot in our society

Saturday, July 4, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: money,power,sexuality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allotey Abossey 27 July 2015

Excellent display of wits and thoughts. Good work my friend

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Kinyua Karanja 07 July 2015

I like the way you address the issues in our society. The rottenness of our social morals and corruption at different levels. Keep it there.

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Abdalla Juma Shenga 05 July 2015

a nice piece. my favorite is the last verse

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Julius Lenjatin 06 July 2015

Thank you

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Shakil Ahmed 04 July 2015

beautiful poem with different thought.

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Julius Lenjatin 06 July 2015

Thank you, for this comment

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Julius Lenjatin 06 July 2015

thanks

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