THE SUMMER’S WIND!
As I walked the lonely beach the other day,
You had come in like the summer’s wind,
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lovely poem Raj. its so nostalgic, full of longing for a dear one with whom you built cherished memories. very picturesque as well, as Karin writes. i think i was going back in time with you with the summer wind. 10++ Mamta
Raj, this is a simply lovely poem, romance and longing for, one who has sailed away. Of all the memories we have, those of lost loves, always seem to reappear. regards Bob 10+
Raj, I knew by the title I would love your poem and I do, so very much. I can feel the wind and your emotions ebb and fall as this picturesque poem closes to tie in so beautifully to The Summer Wind in the title. I feel photography would be an even more creative way to accompany this wonderful poem and can picture a woman walking into the sea with a flowing dress with her footprints leading down to the sea. 10 Karin Anderson
Very nostalgic. Your imagery is wonderful. Your elegiac mood very touching. So many memories blown away on the summer wind.10/10. Warm regards, Sandra
Your poem reminds me of the great old song ' in the summer time, when the weather is high....'.Great job Raj.