The Sun Poem by ntwari axel

The Sun

Rating: 3.5


My friend, where are you?
The clouds and the night always hide you.
In summer, someone is having fun at the beach.
Children are outside, singing and speaking your name.
Each morning, you empty our houses.
Today, I will start to walk freely in the nature.
Then you will show me the way to the sea.
After all this moment together,
You will tell Goodby, see you tomorrow.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marcella D 01 August 2009

this is a very creative poem you have here ntwari

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Stephanie Starr 01 August 2009

This poem is beautiful and has stunning imagery. You have a talent that can be used for many, many more poems. Keep writing!

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 30 July 2009

a good poem. Nice words!

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Pink Butterfly ... 30 July 2009

Soooo magnificent! ! ! Brilliant imagery! ! !

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