The Sweet Ones Poem by me poet yeps poet

The Sweet Ones

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The sweet ones
who comment sweetly
are hardly any
as the world proceeds on
such beautiful ones are also gone
The hardness prevails
as all know
one day those unwanted ones
will also go
AND
they damn well know

Tuesday, March 29, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: poet,criticism
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
the world has good and bad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muhamed Rezah 30 March 2022

Do you seriously think this is poetry? You are totally senile, if so.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 30 March 2022

The Sweet Ones are still there. They have not gone! Good & bad always exist together. More importantly, how we deal with them.

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me poet yeps poet 19 April 2022

THANKS ANOTHER YOU TUBE AHHA

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me poet yeps poet 09 April 2022

YOU I C R REALLY WISE TNX MA; AM, , , , ,

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me poet yeps poet 30 March 2022

kindness Geetaji thanks

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Richard Wlodarski 29 March 2022

My friend, don't waste your energy on the not-so-good ones. The good ones love you and your poetry

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me poet yeps poet 30 March 2022

you do I KNOW IT RW I TOO THANKS TO U

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me poet yeps poet 29 March 2022

WHICH ONE ARE YOU

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