Tuesday, December 5, 2017

The Table, The Swing And The Mouse(For Children) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The lady on the swing, swinging
The swing with the lady, swinging
The table in front felt jealous
As it couldn't swing like them joyous
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Indira Renganathan
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Savita Tyagi 13 December 2017

So entertaining and humorous! I have to read more of your poetry. You are truly an inspiration!

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Akhtar Jawad 06 December 2017

A beautiful fun for the children, but this ols man also enjoyed it.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 December 2017

A very amusing piece of work dear madam..enjoyed! ..Mouse came in to help the table It began to shred and nibble...Gnawed, chewed the legs of the table-profound humor..10

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Seema 05 December 2017

A fun write, thanks for sharing. It made me smile. take care

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