Jonathan ROBIN

Freshman - 544 Points (22 September / London)

The Thrush - 0064 - Initial Version - Poem by Jonathan ROBIN

Desolate destruction, spot fire bombs fall,
A timid thrush now worms beside one wall.

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Rewritten as haiku 11 April 2010

Haiku - 0064 - Crushed Thrush Hushed - Current Version
Cluster bombs' free fall
breed desolate destruction:
timid thrush, one wall.

The number in the title refers to the chronological order of the first version unless the poem was omitted from the original list and rediscovered. Revised versions retain the initial number.

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 17, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 18, 2012

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