Write Angles Poem by John Paul Butler

Write Angles

Rating: 5.0


Wrecked angles
Can't form rectangles
When they've come out
Of the angle grinder

And you can try angles
To make triangles
But if they're not right
They'll be the wrong ones

Even if you actually do
Pick the right angles
What remains unused
Will always be left angles

And just maybe
All of these angles
Aren't angles but angels
Of a misspelt youth

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Phil J Hambling 08 April 2023

A slice of pi

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 08 April 2023

Nice. Intellegent imagination

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Bri Edwards 10 April 2023

I give 5 stars, partly 'for the Hell of it'.

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Bri Edwards 10 April 2023

'In America, 'misspelled' dominates. The use of 'misspelt' as the past tense or past participle of 'to spell' is considered a spelling mistake by most Americans. Brits Will Accept 'Misspelled' or 'Misspelt'

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Bri Edwards 10 April 2023

st.3: 'If' doesn't seem like the right choice of words. here. Was it the only one you had left? ?

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Bri Edwards 10 April 2023

stanza 3 is my favorite, , , , so far, BTW, welcome yo PH. : )

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Bri Edwards 10 April 2023

'Wrecked angles Can't form rectangles' How 'bout 'With wrecked angles you can't erect rectangles'?

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Bri Edwards 20 April 2023

forget my suggestion

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