Monday, September 26, 2005

The Two Of Us - What A Pair We Were Comments

Rating: 3.9

So soft, I thought it was a feather
your touch was full of love yet
I wanted more, a grip of strength
with probing fingers bearing signals
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Pradeep Dhavakumar 26 September 2005

Good poem, Herbert. The ending is very good. Thank you.

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Uriah Hamilton 26 September 2005

powerful lines of desire with a great ending.

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 26 September 2005

Oh my....So sensual.....Woke me up good this morning!

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Mary Nagy 26 September 2005

Very nice Herbert......romantic as well as sensual....both are a must in my book. sincerely, Mary

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