The Unheard Gossips Poem by Uddhab Naik

The Unheard Gossips

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Today in the morning I saw
A bird chirping & fluffing her wings.
I wished she could teach me
The ways to be happy.

Just amidst the unheard gossips
Between us
A nasty breeze passed by
Shivering the holy creature.

The wreathed band of love
As shelter on the hibiscus
Got pulled down leaving her homeless.
But still she smiled & blinked her eyes.

O! What a lesson it was!
Life sways and I with Ups and Downs.
Let me not curse my attempts
And make a smile undying.

Wednesday, September 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarah Mkhonza 26 April 2018

I love your observations of life in this poem

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Chinedu Dike 06 February 2017

Lovely philosophical piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned in good diction with insight. Thanks for sharing.

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Uddhab Naik 26 April 2018

Thanks Chinedu Dike. I am happy that you read my poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 August 2016

Beautiful and positive flow of words. Beautiful message delivered especially the concluding lines.... Let me not curse my attempts And make a smile undying. Let us keep smiling as challenges are just a part of life.

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Uddhab Naik 22 August 2016

Thank u mam.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 29 October 2015

Inspiring.A nice write.

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Uddhab Naik 22 August 2016

Thank U.

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Arvind Sahu 01 October 2015

It beautifully describes about the ways to be happy

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