The Untamed Current Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Untamed Current

Rating: 5.0

Our love has its own course,
it flows through untamed
and unyielding waters.
Those who seek to engineer
its path will find only
a life's journey
full of misery.

For love is like
the vast, abyssal ocean:

where the river seeks,
rest in its depths--
the one that carries
the willing heart.

Go with the natural flow of life
and let the current
be the helmsman
of our journey of love.

Copyright 2026, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Friday, March 27, 2026
Topic(s) of this poem: journey
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 30 March 2026

Magnificent imagery and wisdom of heart! .. Ever so beautiful! ..

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Anjandev Roy 27 March 2026

Absolutely perfect..... brilliant conclusion..... thanks for sharing....

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Richard Wlodarski 09 April 2026

Naturally beautiful in exquisite, vivid imagery. A joy to behold!

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Timber Koleden 03 April 2026

May the Helmsman guide our love, indeed! So well written!

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Timber Koleden 03 April 2026

Beautiful piece, Mrs. Marie! Thank you so much for sharing again! I love how well you develop your overall point through such clever imagery!

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Michael Cochrane 01 April 2026

Love lost a lady who wears her heart on her sleeve. Excellent poem

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Rebecca Navarre 30 March 2026

Brilliantly composed! .. Bravo! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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