Our love has its own course,
it flows through untamed
and unyielding waters.
Those who seek to engineer
its path will find only
a life's journey
full of misery.
For love is like
the vast, abyssal ocean:
where the river seeks,
rest in its depths--
the one that carries
the willing heart.
Go with the natural flow of life
and let the current
be the helmsman
of our journey of love.
Copyright 2026, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
Absolutely perfect..... brilliant conclusion..... thanks for sharing....
Naturally beautiful in exquisite, vivid imagery. A joy to behold!
Beautiful piece, Mrs. Marie! Thank you so much for sharing again! I love how well you develop your overall point through such clever imagery!
Love lost a lady who wears her heart on her sleeve. Excellent poem
Brilliantly composed! .. Bravo! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Magnificent imagery and wisdom of heart! .. Ever so beautiful! ..