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Under The Blue Star

Rating: 4.9

Sky watching
On top of a mass of green and brown
Sitting knee to knee
Forehead to forehead
Under the blue star.

Two hearts beat as one
Dreams that are so high
They can move mountains
Enable us to leap
And meet the blue star.

We belong
To two different worlds
Set by a social class
It meant nothing to us
But the rest of the world is harsh.

The night is windy
It seduced and ironed
My natural curly hair
Like the way you used to do
Everytime we meet
Under the blue star.

You vanished into thin air
But I am here
All alone and lonely
With bended knees
Under the blue star
I pray for your safety.

You have gone to
Another country
To its city
Where stars are plentiful
And beautiful
White, yellow, brown
Black and tan.

You want to prove
And show to everyone
That someone like you
Could change and turn
The world upside down.




Copyright 2017, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Saturday, November 25, 2017
Star Poems: 6 / 500
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 15 October 2018

You vanished into thin air But I am here All alone and lonely With bended knees Under the blue star I pray for your safety.......earnest prayer! Wonderfully penned! An exceptional piece of poetry! My great pleasure reading it time and again!

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Sharron Stephenson 17 October 2018

I feel the words nice write

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 November 2018

You want to prove To everyone That someone Like you could turn The world upside down.......captivating expression! My great pleasure reading this great poem very often! To..MyPoemList

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Luo Zhihai 12 October 2018

Under the blue star, we are more happy!

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Anjandev Roy 08 March 2020

Superb piece. anjandev roy.

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Indira Renganathan 28 October 2021

A longing heart's loving lovely words...beautifully crafted...5*****

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Raspberry18 29 September 2021

A sad love story. Very touching.

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Nabakishore Dash 26 August 2021

Brilliant write of love.

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Paula 12 May 2021

I am a sucker for love poems well done.

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Bryan Smoot 12 May 2021

Beautiful love poem 10+++

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