The View Of Misty Eyes! Poem by Ramesh T A

The View Of Misty Eyes!

Rating: 5.0


Misty eyes see everything everywhere in smoke...;
For the misty eyes, everything looks to be vague;
Real world and all happenings look as dream world;
Unless the eyes are clear and clean, all are vague!

It's the same for dizzy mind that makes all as dream
For one who is in apparent sleep though not sleeping;
Only for the clear mind, the truth of things is known
That leads one to go confident anywhere one likes..!

For the drunkard, whether in sleep or awake, everyhting
Looks to be the same due to one's resolution to forget
All things happening against one's desire and wish in
The world that goes on whether one like or not forever!

When all things are not in one's favour, misty eyes,
Dizzy mind and booze keep one float in dream world to
Overcome the rigour of world life unbearable and one
Can't stop things happening beyond one's control ever!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 27 July 2018

When all things are not in one's favour, misty eyes, Dizzy mind and booze keep one float in dream world to Overcome the rigour of world life unbearable and one Can't stop things happening beyond one's control ever! Sparkling poetic expression my friend! A beautiful piece of work! (10)

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Ramesh T A 27 July 2018

Thank you for reading and quoting the lines you liked that make my poem a beautiful piece!

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Ramesh T A

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Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India
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