Theorem The Truth Serum

Rookie - 245 Points (1979-present / San Leandro)

The Vultures Are Here To Finish The Job - Poem by Theorem The Truth Serum

I woke up with the feeling of being
a carton of ice cream in the freezer
I got out of bed and my bones chomped
like mountain-top snow
The cold was nibbling on them
because it already got the meat
The vultures are here to finish the job
When will the spring come


Comments about The Vultures Are Here To Finish The Job by Theorem The Truth Serum

  • (1/15/2006 5:17:00 PM)


    It's hell being a cold-natured being isn't it. You need to move to the tropics my friend. Good write. Great images and a fine finish, too.10 from me with empathy.

    Hugh
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  • Ernestine Northover (1/15/2006 4:44:00 PM)


    Nothing worse than the chill in the bones. If I could I'd send you a hot water bottle. Hows that for 'thinking of you' type friendship. Nice poem. Love Ernestine XXX (Report) Reply

  • (1/15/2006 3:36:00 PM)


    That's a pretty bad case of the winter blahs.......... nicely put though. I can definitely relate! Sincerely, Mary (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 15, 2006

Poem Edited: Monday, October 23, 2006


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